Changes we made to the rough edit

Once we recieved feedback we made the following changes,

• Our titles were moving to fast and were not big enough for the audience to see them properly so we decided to slow them down and make them larger.
• We had numerous shots of Gordon walking up the staircase which we decided to cut. This shortened the sequence as we found it was not necessary in the storyline.
• The narration was read at a steady speed however our playground scene was still to long, so we decided to change the speed at which is played to fit the narration better.
• Our film is an independent British Indie film so we thought that Studiocanal would suit the feel of the film better than Eon Productions, which is known for producing James Bond.
• We decided to fade the music out instead of cutting it off as it made it less noticable to the audience.